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on cutting and growing

    Cuttings

    Sticks-in-a-drowse over sugary loam,
    Their intricate stem-fur dries;
    But still the delicate slips keep coaxing up water;
    The small cells bulge;

    One nub of growth
    Nudges a sand-crumb loose,
    Pokes through a musty sheath
    Its pale tendrilous horn.

    Theodore Roethke, “The Lost Son and Other Poems” (1948)

An aphorism is a “cutting,” because the Greek verb aphorizdo is to “cut.” So a book of aphorisms is a selection of short pieces cut and pasted together. Wittgenstein was in the habit of writing short passages, cutting them out with scissors, and throwing them in a box. The results were published as a book entitled “Cuttings” (Zettel) which might be considered an unpretentious word for “aphorisms.” That form had attained high esteem but also some pomposity with Schlegel, Kleist, Karl Kraus, Walter Benjamin, and other German authors.

Blog posts are also “cuttings” in this sense. I think many people who write or read blogs would be embarrassed to call them “aphorisms,” but they hope that the juxtaposition of short snippets of text will be generative, like sticks in wet soil. Good blogs are contributions to something more ambitious and more coherent. Our quick and scattered thoughts have the potential to come together in linear form. Which brings up another meaning of a “cutting”–a piece of a plant that could begin to grow. Theodore Roethke explores that meaning in remarkable pendant poems from 1948.

    Cuttings (later)

    This urge, wrestle, resurrection of dry sticks,
    Cut stems struggling to put down feet.
    What saint strained so much,
    Rose on such lopped limbs to a new life?

    I can hear, underground, that sucking and sobbing,
    In my veins, in my bones I feel it, —
    The small waters seeping upward,
    The tight grains parting at last.
    When sprouts break out,
    Slippery as fish,
    I quail, lean to beginnings, sheath-wet.

    Theodore Roethke, “The Lost Son and Other Poems” (1948)

In both poems, especially the latter, the verbs are hard to distinguish from the nouns. In “Cuttings (later)”, the words “urge,” “wrestle,” and “cut” are used as nouns. That first sentence has no verb at all. In line three, “strained” is a verb, but it first struck me as an adjective. Plants, of course, are objects; we think of action taking place in the animal kingdom, which is also the realm of suffering. But vegetable cuttings are acting when they begin to sprout–they need verbs. Roethke’s language represents the pain of moving into action, of nouns taking on verbs. The verse shifts from objective description (about the plants) to Roethke’s own response. The two poems are themselves cuttings, separated from each other in the original volume, removed from any lengthy narrative or argument, but straining to grow and to inspire growth.

Clay Pit Pond

Focus first on the black trunks, then the snow
that beats the ripples, then the wind-whipped flag,
the high school’s streaked cement and darkened glass,
like the building I would have trudged up to
twenty-five winters past. He tugs to move,
snuffling his first snow; everything’s a first
for him–hunched ducks on logs, the distant train.
In my ears, Albinoni’s oboes step
lightly, unruffled by the imminent
coda, and take the repeat serenely,
even though poor old Tomasso’s been dead
(of diabetes) more than two hundred
sodden Venetian winters. The coda comes,
the dog pulls me homeward, and where we’d stood,
the patient snow melts back into the waves.

from the Vita Nuova of Dante

Here is a poem from Dante’s Vita Nuova (xix, 31-36). I originally translated it for my book-in-progress that I’m calling Ethics from Fiction: Philosophy and Literature in Dante and Modern Times. I recently deleted this particular poem from the manuscript because I decided it was a digression. I don’t actually like it all that much, and I’m not sure that Dante did, either. Ever since Mark Musa’s Dante’s Vita Nuova: A Translation and an Essay (Bloomington, 1973), some have interpreted the Vita Nuova as Dante’s self-critique. His main problem is that he doesn’t know the object of his love poems, Beatrice, so his poems are self-indulgent. Here he uses the theme of the “Lady Passes” to praise a woman who is a distant figure him:

My lady is desired in highest heaven

And I want you to discern her virtue too.

If you’d seem a noble lady, I say: Go,

Walk with her as she passes through the streets,

For into villainous hearts Love drives ice,

And all thoughts freeze until they perish;

And anyone who dares remain and watch

Must become a noble thing, or else he dies.

It is better in Italian–click below.

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bloggerel

To bleg is to beg on your blog, your blog.
A blog made of movies: a vlog.
To twitter’s to text folks your latest post;
A flog is a blog by a corporate ghost.
A blath is on math; a blawg covers law;
A troll will pounce on your teeniest flaw.
An attorney whose mind is a fog
Should post his bleg on a blawg web log.
To clog a blog, you jam it with spam:
Just ping that thing a link to your scam.
The blogosphere, it’s got it all:
Rolls and blolls and folderol.
Post anything on yours–it’s fine;
Just don’t forget to link to mine.
Quotes and lies, it all is free;
Just don’t forget to link to me.

(If you think I made any of this up, click here.)

come with me

Oh, come with me and be my love,
For Saturday night–that’s enough.
Next week, I’ve got a paper due,
A service gig, an interview too.
“Come with me”: remember, from our course?
(Also a pun, which I’d better not force.)
Yes, I deleted “live”–but you can stay
‘Til ten. Then I’ll work on my résumé.
Slippers and buckles of the finest gold:
One day you’ll have those, and someone to hold.
But I’m by myself now; the market’s tight;
For now, I’ve got to focus, network, fight.
Wait ’til we’re forty, and then maybe
You can be my love and live with me.

[For ease of reference, here’s the Marlowe original and previous replies by Walter Ralegh, C. Day Lewis, William Carlos Williams, and Odgen Nash.]